Embracing the pleasurable memories,
Longing for the adore,
Undergoing the droop,
Shielding the afflictions,
Ignorance of intrigue,
Vanity to beat,
Elusive soul of mine, is within me...
Evading Contemplations,
Lamenting to moan,
Unclear vague of thoughts,
Subtle intricacy of yours,
Intangible with held ,
Void smirk to show,
Elusive soul of you, though speaks them all..!!!
PS: This piece of mine depicting kind of lost love, has been written for OSI prompt of the week-Elusive..!!!
Also, linking it to AO.
PPS:A sincere thanks here goes to Leo for his great insisting to take this prompt and ofcourse KP uncle for your kind suggestions..thanks ya..!!!
27 comments:
Once again, and I can't say it enough, love can very elusive, but there are times when this is preferred, keep one on their toes, so to speak. I enjoyed this, glad you posted it.
Deep and enjoyable words.
just the word ELUSIVE and it seems we're not at a lost for words to express it...:)
real, true love elusive? yes, maybe and sometimes it does, and if not, it always is...:)
hey Madhu, i can relate to your take of the prompt...:)
read mine, it's posted now but quite long, hope you won't get bored, he he he...
i always find the enjoyment of words in ur blog..:)
well written..keep it up..
The combination of choice words in each line is admirable.You have a way of playing with words to great effect.
Evading thought can make for a difficult journey toward love. Thanks for joining us today.
Deep, moody, provactive. Very well done.
Interesting word choices! I like acrostics because they make us think of words we might not normally use.
m glad i prodded u on to write on the prompt! it is absolutely delightful to read! :)
good deep words!
@Amias..heyy thnx a lott..ya it mite b dat ways..well,i jus wrote ..nothin intentional..!!!
@anthony..thnx 4 droppin by..:)
@Amity..heyy it mite happen re..well,was just a wrk of imagination..hehe..thnx a lott ya..hav read urs,even cmmnted..nice post..!!!
@Prams..thnk u my dear..i always njoy ur presence here..hehe..:)
@KP..heyy..thnx so much..ur suggestions were vry kind..thnx a lott..!!!
@Sandy..thnx a lot, for coming..:) n ya m happy to join osi..:)
@Loch..thnk u fr visitin my space..:)
@Linda..thnk u vry much..ya,even i luvv acros..:)
@Leo..heyyy..u liked it..thnkx ya..jus wrote coz u insisted..so happy finally..hehehe..:)
Just wanted to let you know I dropped by and read your lovely elusive poem.
Wonderful take on the prompt and an acrostic too. Lovely
love, Melanie
Wonderful acrostics - elusive love comes through loud and clear!
Mads, this is a very nice acrostic. I do believe that for a fee I could connect your longing poet with other love lost seeking elusive poets.
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@Maggie..heyy thnx a lott..thnks 4 followin..:)
@Cassiopela..thnk u so much Melanie..:)
@Tumblewords..thnks a ton..:)
@Jim..thnks a ton ..its my pleasure..:)
Nice..very nice
It's been awhile since I've seen a good acrostic! My favorite line - Longing for the adore. I love that line. It is so true for the majority of us, to experience it as the giver, and also as the receiver!
wonderful, touching words!!
great job!!
@Jukota..thnx 4 visiting..thnx..u liked it..:)
@Shradha..heyy thnk u so much 4 ur kind visit, thnx a lot..keep coming..!!!
Admirable words carefully woven...Lovely!
@mani..thnx a tonne fr ur luvly appreciation..:)
wonderful piece
so many facets to the sharing we call love
so many facets that draw us in
alluring in its elusive ways
@Lee..thnx 4 coming n sparing tyme..thnk u so much..!!!
I wondered why you didn't submit this last month, glad you did it for this month as I enjoyed them both.
Please put the AO link at the bottom of this poem too.
hi Amias..
so glad that you liked it..thanks a lot..just don't know,why it didn't clicked me to submit last month..you could have told me..:) anyways,submitted this time..nd yes,will put AO'link for sure..thanks..:)
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