Flying high with rejuvenation, Rejuvenation of inspiration,
Inspiration instilled with memories enchanting,
Enchanting with joys and emotions numerable,
Numerable turns in the journey it dwells,
Dwells the art of sharing,
Sharing thoughts of vague and happiness,
Happiness drafting this bond inseparable,
Inseparable, though miles of distance persists,
Persists there love,trust and care, which makes us friends forever..!!!
12 comments:
Great.The poem is unique somewhat like anthakshari, the last word forming the next word.The poem is wonderfully written.Thanks
that is a beautiful poem
and so very beautifully composed
and thanks for stopping by my blog...your appreciative comment has thrilled deepak...thanks
heyy..thnx a lot both of u, for ur valuable comments..keep visiting for more..:) thnx again nd ya..@KPartha..dis form is called loop poetry..tried for the very first time..!!!
Superb...:)
A nice composition madhu
@Pramoda..thnks ya..i mean it..:)
Madhu you had this linked to both September and August prompts. I kept it on August prompt since that is when you wrote them.
Welcome again to Acrostic Only. I really enjoyed this poem.
okk..ya n thnx a lot..!!!
umm.. Madhu..
the thought is brilliant, friendship is indeed what u say.. a loop acrostic that is quite fantastic :)
but why giving the same acrostic for poet's choice every month? :) try a different word or phrase... it would be better i think!
heyy..its nt the same every time..last mnth i gave abt Silence..
well, try diff also..thnx fr da advice..
OH? Apologies dear... I just saw Amias' comment and told thats all ... :) if it is different, then well n good. :) hehe...
This is a very interesting way to write an acrostic and I like your creativity.
In keeping with this style, you should have ended it with "flying".
Check the spelling, in several places you have "nd" should that be "and". If you are trying to shorten "and" you can put "&", it means the same.
@Amias..ya, will make da changes..used slangs actually..:)
ya..culdn't link it wid flying..neways thanks a lot..!!!
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