Saturday, August 22, 2009


Flying high with rejuvenation,
ejuvenation of inspiration,

nspiration instilled with memories enchanting,

nchanting with joys and emotions numerable,

Numerable turns in the journey it dwells,
wells the art of sharing,

haring thoughts of vague and happiness,

appiness drafting this bond inseparable,

nseparable, though miles of distance persists,

ersists there love,trust and care, which makes us friends forever..!!!


KParthasarathi said...

Great.The poem is unique somewhat like anthakshari, the last word forming the next word.The poem is wonderfully written.Thanks

lakshmi said...

that is a beautiful poem
and so very beautifully composed

and thanks for stopping by my blog...your appreciative comment has thrilled deepak...thanks

Mads... said...

heyy..thnx a lot both of u, for ur valuable comments..keep visiting for more..:) thnx again nd ya..@KPartha..dis form is called loop poetry..tried for the very first time..!!!

Being Pramoda... said...


A nice composition madhu

Mads... said...

@Pramoda..thnks ya..i mean it..:)

Amias said...

Madhu you had this linked to both September and August prompts. I kept it on August prompt since that is when you wrote them.

Welcome again to Acrostic Only. I really enjoyed this poem.

Mads... said...

okk..ya n thnx a lot..!!!

Leo said...

umm.. Madhu..

the thought is brilliant, friendship is indeed what u say.. a loop acrostic that is quite fantastic :)

but why giving the same acrostic for poet's choice every month? :) try a different word or phrase... it would be better i think!

Mads... said...

heyy..its nt the same every time..last mnth i gave abt Silence..
well, try diff also..thnx fr da advice..

Leo said...

OH? Apologies dear... I just saw Amias' comment and told thats all ... :) if it is different, then well n good. :) hehe...

Amias said...

This is a very interesting way to write an acrostic and I like your creativity.

In keeping with this style, you should have ended it with "flying".

Check the spelling, in several places you have "nd" should that be "and". If you are trying to shorten "and" you can put "&", it means the same.

Mads... said...

@Amias..ya, will make da changes..used slangs actually..:)
ya..culdn't link it wid flying..neways thanks a lot..!!!