Shining jewels in the gloomy sky,
Countless, they seem as a beam,
I gaze them with a glare,
My angels with a gloss of twinkle,
Beholding my dreams,
Upcasting my wish,
My sacred gems, grant me in swift,
entrusting you I unlax my eyes,
but with a glimpse of sight,
the chilly dawn takes you in abate,
clasp the dream to,I wake with a gust,
crushed,I am to see you all lost,
left with a wait,staring the cloudy haze,
with fingers crossed and breath tight,
Awe..I saw them, one,two and all,
am flushed with a ray of hope,
entrapped in rejuvenation of desires,
it's a starry revival, a fresh reincarnation,
a new awakening with more shine,
upholding my dreams, they glow in replete,
Shining in the Castle with streaks..!!!
13 comments:
nicely said.. i esp. liked the rhyme! :)
Hi Mads, this is full of the awe of appreciation. There are many lessons to be learned from those stars. Not astrology either, just in gazing and thinking. :-)
Do you suppose this is how Van Gogh felt as he painted his famous Stary Night?
Vincent Van Gogh is my favorite artist. We spent a week in St. Remy, France, marveling at the scenes of which he painted. Van Gogh spent a year.
Van Gogh's Stary Night
Jim's Little Blog Van Gogh Search
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Such a beautiful take on what it means to be a star, to be among the stars....
Makes me wonder where the stars have been, and who they might be... because I talk to them all the time, and I really do think some of them are listening!
it's just too deep Maddy, am at a lost for words to say how brilliant you are...never tell it to Leo, he might lend me a dictionary, ha ha ha...:)
'a starry revival
entrapped in rejuvenation of desires'
oh no! this is really wonderful reincarnation...:)
thumbs up to my dearest Maddy!
This was magical...a delight to read!
Hello Madhu, Thank You for stopping by, else i'd have never stumbled on this. Would come back to read more.
Loved the imagery here...what a way to wake up...rejuvenated desires, upholding the dreams which shine like stars..good one.
Expansive thoughts - universal, yet personal. Wonderful!
Awesome poem! The flows and rhyme is simply brilliant.
Well done madhu :-)
Very interesting take on the prompt. Stars and galaxies are forever? Or do they too burn and return.
love, Melanie
hey u have a magical strength of using the words..i admire it frm ur way..:) good going..
I like the rhyming...
time and time again
"a new awakening with more shine"
They do listen! beautiful and timeless!
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