Frosty Chill, and
Freezing shiver
Oh ,this winter severe,
is hard to beat.
Waves of quiver,
Thunder blast,and
cloudburst of rain,
wintry terror has
much to shower.
Cozy comfy blanket
to cuddle, and
hot sip to sup,
until this chilly breeze,
brisks away with drift.
Frozen hands,and stiff fingers,
couching words,losing trigger,
but my utmost desire,
giving them shape,
I wish to be a poetic sage..:)
Freezing shiver
Oh ,this winter severe,
is hard to beat.
Waves of quiver,
Thunder blast,and
cloudburst of rain,
wintry terror has
much to shower.
Cozy comfy blanket
to cuddle, and
hot sip to sup,
until this chilly breeze,
brisks away with drift.
Frozen hands,and stiff fingers,
couching words,losing trigger,
but my utmost desire,
giving them shape,
I wish to be a poetic sage..:)
11 comments:
Wow...so you wrote this just this morning...:)
I can feel how cool it is...:)
a comfy blanket and a sip of hot choc'ltes will do wonders really and of course, in those wintry nights, we become poetic, indeed!
I like how you express your feelings very much! Keep on...keep up!!!
I like
sorry only now that i read it, have to go to the grocery and wet market for our week's supply on food and everything...:)
have a great weekend...:)
wow
loved it :)
I DON'T LIKE WINTERS!!
BUT THE LINES WERE COOL...MADE ME SHIVER HERE!!:S
Loved it...
especially this:
"Frozen hands,and stiff fingers,
couching words,losing trigger,
but my utmost desire,
giving them shape,
I wish to be a poetic sage..:)"
Great beauty depicted in the words u chose..u already are a poetic freak.. :) and a great facebook friend.. Lol..who keeps liking everything..Hugggsss...
this was so beautiful !!! so much of a nice cold feelin :)
wowii makes you wanna grab chaai coffee and get inside the blanket :)
this winter guess we all are frozen. i love winters.loved your feelings too.
Hi,
you got fantastic thought process.
By the way thanks for stopping by on my blog and putting it in your must watch list:)
wonderful..
i loved it..
hey this tyemplate s all pinky pinky like mine..:)
Nice one...
Chilly,windy or frosty you can pen such beautiful words without quivering! Good Job.
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